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    Is My College Essay Okay?

    Seniors: It’s college application season. With the pre-existing stress from maintaining good grades, finding teachers to write recommendation letters, and filling out applications, the dreaded college essay only adds to the madness. Many students are unsure where to start with the daunting task, but taking it step by step makes the process less overwhelming and more manageable.

     

    Choosing A Topic

    • Use brainstorming activities to get your creative juices flowing
    • Think about interests, challenges, achievements, activities, etc.
    • Look at Common App’s prompts- there are a few to choose from, or you can opt for the open-ended response
    • Make sure your topic reflects who you are as a person
    • If you’re struggling to write, take breaks and come back to your ideas at a later time

     

    Picking a Hook

    • The opening of your essay is meant to grab the reader’s attention
    • Sometimes, it is easier to have a detailed outline of your essay before writing the hook
    • Some ideas for a hook:
      • Set the scene- use descriptive language to highlight a particular setting or event
      • Personal anecdote- reflect on a particular memory or event in your life
      • Ask a question- get the reader thinking right from the start
      • Short statement- capture the reader’s attention with a shocking, interesting, or even confusing statement that makes them want to keep reading

    Staying within the Word Count

    • Common App limits your essay to 650 words
    • Write thoroughly, but focus on the most important details
    • Tips on how to reduce your word count:
      • Eliminate redundant adverbs (very, extremely, absolutely, etc.)
      • Use adjectives sparingly- instead, use stronger nouns
      • Turn a passive sentence into an active one

    Editing

    • Have trusted friends, family, or teachers read your essay to offer any advice or insight
    • Double-check your spelling and grammar- sometimes small mistakes can slip by you!
    • Make sure your overall message is clear
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    Katherine Kilsey
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